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Thursday, July 4, 2019

Term 2 Week 10 writing

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  1. Hi Matthew im Michael. I like the way you said the fire burned like lava. Next time you could maybe add a adjective/simile at the building part.
    Once i had some KFC before it tasted good.

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  2. Thank you Michael i will try that next time.

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