Hi Matthew im Michael. I like the way you said the fire burned like lava. Next time you could maybe add a adjective/simile at the building part. Once i had some KFC before it tasted good.
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Hi Matthew im Michael. I like the way you said the fire burned like lava. Next time you could maybe add a adjective/simile at the building part.
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Thank you Michael i will try that next time.
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