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Tuesday, August 13, 2019

Term 3 Week 3 writing


This week we have been learning to write a persuasive piece of writing.
The things we needed to include were an introduction,
3 reasons and a conclusion.
My topic was too much money is a good thing.
Do you agree or disagree?

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  2. Hi Matt it's Mic.I like the way you tried really hard on your work to prove that its true.Next time you could fix the third paragraph because you repeated the same thing. Did you know that some people can be faking on poor. I did a different thing than you i wrote (too much money is a bad thing.

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  3. hi Matthew, I don't really with your opinion and like your script.
    next time can you make bigger writing.
    why do you think it is a good thing

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    1. Hi Daniel
      I will try to make the writing bigger next time. I think having money is good thing because you can donate to people.

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