Hello people
These weeks we have been writing a narrative about a scene and monsters and make a pick a path and I chose a scene about a big house floating house that is flying very very high because it has a lot of big helium balloons attached to it and then we have to write 5 paragraph senses of the picture and then we have to introduce monsters in it and then make a pick a path about it and then we have to upload it and put it on a slideshow and then publish it onto our blog.
Wednesday, August 26, 2020
Writing
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Hi Matthew! Its Kezia here!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you wrote what your procedure was and how you set it up. I did a slide show as well of my story. Maybe next time you could add capital letters when starting and new sentence like "Yes the weird monster said" It shouldn't have the quote marks until the word said it should have it until the word.(Like this -> "Yes" the weird monster said.) Anyway other than that I LOVE your story!
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-Kezia
Hi Matthew! I'm Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your monster pick a path it was interesting and you didn't say what Matthew monsters name is. Next time you could check if they make sense
By Daisy.