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This week we have been writing a description writing about a tree in the middle of two paths and one path is bad and the other path is good.
I can see a ginormous tree in between two paths. There is a filthy gloomy path filled with rubbish and smells of disgusting dog dungy and it makes my nose feel uncomfortable. I can see a nuclear plant putting smoke clouds into the sky.
However, there is a second path on the opposite side with beautiful sunshine and a clean city and no rubbish or piles of dungy on the place and bright yellow sunflowers. There is also a deer at the start of the path. On the other path one half of the reww has fully grown and the other half has no green leaves at all and has a scary vulture staring at stuff and loudly screeching.
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